two thousand feet

Gibson's Cave in January

01/07/05

Cold curtain of ice
Lacy patterns intertwined
Frozen in our time.

by Mrs Pollard

Written by St Cuthberts RC Primary - river: A River

Link to this content = Gibson's Cave in January • 16 comments •

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Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

Hi Mrs Pollard

I think your poem is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

From Charlotte

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:49

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

Mrs pollard
I think your poem is fantastic. like the icey layer bit

from laura

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:50

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

I really like your pome. Its the best!!!!!!!!!! wish i thought of one like that

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:51

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

Hi Mrs Pollard

Your poem is brilliant it's the best ever!!!!!!!!!

Love Emma

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:51

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

the best poem i've seen yet Mrs Pollard. it's absouloutely great. Helen and Julie even think it's great. They said to leave you a great comment so I did

From Samantha

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:52

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

i like ur poem it is really good!!!!!!!!!

by: Jack

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:53

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

MRS pollard your poem is funky
the best Ive seen yet
bethany

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:53

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

better than everyones even my own!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

David

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:53

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

MRS pollard your poem is funky
the best Ive seen yet
bethany

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:54

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

MRS pollard your poem is funky
the best Ive seen yet
bethany

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:55

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

MRS pollard your poem is funky
the best Ive seen yet
bethany

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:55

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

hi Mrs Pollard
your poem is great wish it was mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
from casey

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 11:56

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

Nice one mrs pollard

callum

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 12:04

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

Your poem is super

from rebecca

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 12:07

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

best in the world

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 12:09

Comment from: St Cuthberts RC Primary [Member]

don't know who you are miss bu t I think your poem is the worst!! you need to go baxck to school

from: Mr Mysterie

Permalink 01/07/05 @ 16:52

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